Sunday, 10 May 2015

Autumn comes late to soldiers at war

Autumn comes late to soldiers at war


soldiers at war march in the rain
rain pours on their steel helmets
heavy tanks move slowly but fire quickly
trenches flood over with whatever liquid
cold wind blows bullets

2 comments:

  1. Great story I like how you said rain pours on their steel helmets. It reminds me of when I was camping and we were setting up the tent and a rain storm came. Lewis

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  2. Great story I like how you said rain pours on their steel helmets. It reminds me of when I was camping and we were setting up the tent and a rain storm came. Lewis

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